Here is a poem, I am trying to write:
Can you?
Can you imagine my fears,
the long nights and my eyes full of tears.
Can you see the emotion build up inside me,
I want to run, but I am not free.
Can you feel the fear I am feeling,
the life or death, heart is really reeling.
Can you feel the panic I am facing,
and the heart that shouldn't be racing.
I can feel these things and they are real to me,
fear running my heart up a tree.
Can you sit there reading this and feel fine?
Most of all can anyone spare me the time?
Only true experts and critiqer, plz. Only the serious need to apply. This small amount of work has taken me months. Thank you for any insights, help, or inspirations you have. I rate on quality, not quantity! ty |
