Hi, I am in grade 11, and applying to go to Police Camp. I need to write an "essay" on how I view the police officer's role in society..........For some reason, I dont like the sound of my opening sentence........
Police officers’ role in society is much more than just to, “Maintain the Law”.......
Please tell me if this sentence is fine, or what I need to do to it to make it better. Also, I am wondering if there are any english teachers here, who wouldnt mind proof reading my essay before I handwrite it. If so, please leave an email address. Thanks, J
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