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Please Let me Know What You Think Of This Poem? Liz22 02/24/05
    Can you see what the writer here is trying to say? Is she calling for help?


    Here comes the crows black as night
    Laugh as a little girl runs from the fright
    Teenagers and old men worship to molest and rape her
    Run little girl you're just white trash
    Goodness Father, I had a fever but my head is in destruction as you bash
    Run little girl, run fast we'll catch you, put you on your knees
    Run little girl you'll never be free.
    Run Florest run
    So we can have our fun!
    But this is no Hollywood movie
    It should had been
    But its all been done.
    Tried to sell it to them once
    Answer was, its to devastating to be true
    Make it fiction, lets call it blue
    So, that's what I'll do
    Come you black crows I have money now
    And now the Dove may take her bow

    Joy, From my novel.

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1. Hi Joy, I like your poem. It needs some editing but the hone...
02/24/05 ChouxExcellent or Above Average Answer
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