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Liz22 |
02/24/05 |
Can you see what the writer here is trying to say? Is she calling for help?
Here comes the crows black as night Laugh as a little girl runs from the fright Teenagers and old men worship to molest and rape her Run little girl you're just white trash Goodness Father, I had a fever but my head is in destruction as you bash Run little girl, run fast we'll catch you, put you on your knees Run little girl you'll never be free. Run Florest run So we can have our fun! But this is no Hollywood movie It should had been But its all been done. Tried to sell it to them once Answer was, its to devastating to be true Make it fiction, lets call it blue So, that's what I'll do Come you black crows I have money now And now the Dove may take her bow
Joy, From my novel. |
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