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english help plzzzzzz	henriyaz	10/30/05
hi..teacher..shall be very grateful if u can plz help my daughter to improve her letter writing- I'm not so good @it:-(((( many txs Respected Judges, I wonder if I’m selected or not for the exciting fashion show. This is going to be my first catwalk , displaying my favourite Okadi outfits. Yes, I’m little bit shy to tell you , not only I have lost weight but all says that I do have a good height. I admire famous models taking part at the designer’s fashion shows . So I am hoping with the help of Harry Potter’s magic wand that would transform me soon on the stage along with 29 lucky particpants. Ending now and thanking you for reading my favour.
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Schoolmarm		10/31/05
Hello, Henri. Here is my edited version of your daughter's letter. Wish her good luck for me! ____________________________________ Respected Judges: Please tell me that I will be among the thirty lucky participants chosen for your exciting fashion show. My joy would be boundless if it were so! I am ready and willing to take my first turn down the catwalk in my favourite Okadi outfits. I believe I have the "look" you desire. To join the ranks of the famous models I so greatly admire would be to see my fondest dream realized. With all fingers crossed, I remain Yours, ______________________________________

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